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TEST DRIVE 2/2 by Psshaw TEST DRIVE 2/2 by Psshaw
For one of my school assignments, I chose to do a trial run of a couple pages of DFS to get a feel for where I’m at, comic-making wise. And I’m not exactly doing backflips over it, but I do know where to go from here. I promised myself I wouldn’t point all these awful flaws (apropos of absolutely nothing, perspective is really hard when you’ve been bullshitting it your whole career). So hey, let’s play critique bingo! Maybe you see something I don’t.

This is the actual script so far. These would be… pages 8-11 of the first chapter, approx. It’s the first time we meet Glenn, and a pretty calm scene considering the two incredibly violent ones it’s stuck between. AND WOWEE BEE, LOOK AT THAT EXPOSITION.
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Ryusan Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
can i just say that serial killers actually caring about things and people other than themselves is literally my favorite part about serial killer characters
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Psshaw Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
HECK YES. Not that you could have a decent primary character who was just a belligerent, motivation-less psycho, but still.
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ravengurl11 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can hear them speak in my goddamn head, especially the "but they're FAAAAAMILY" panel. Either you did a good job or I haven't slept for a while.
both is cool.
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AnnieDraws Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
I love your style so much <33 Really gorgeous job on the lines too.
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WickedGrin Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
Hrm. Glenn has gotten very.. dark.. through the life of DFS. Is that a fake or natural tan?
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Psshaw Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
AAAALL NATURAL, BABY. Plus a little hint of a deathly pallor from spending so much time in the dark. I'm still exploring it, but I find it suits his color scheme, so...
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WickedGrin Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
How tall would you say Alan is? Glenn I always imagined being on the shorter side(for a guy).. like 5'5.
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Psshaw Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Even with the little legs, he's proportionally bigger than the average dude, so I think it evens out to about 5'8".

I am way overdue for a height chart.
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piranhapettingzoo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Digital Artist
please please please please do more comics. a lot more. all the time. forever.
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Psshaw Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
UGH.
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